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White Out - Part 30

February 23rd, 2015, 3:41 pm

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Posted by Gigi19972010

And then, White Out ends!

What a truly crazy chapter.
You're probably gonna ask what was this chapter exactly, right? Well then, let me start by saying...
...The idea of this chapter first came simply because cloning Panee would be fun.
Yup, that's the truth. I wanted to clone Panee, mwahaha.
Ok, but really now, why Panee? Well, remember that Marx actually tried to clone Panee once? But he couldn't, because the cloning machine was broken? So yeah, if the cloning machine was fixed, Panee could be cloned... Hey, let's make a chapter based on that!
Yes, now, to be completely honest, at first I was going to make this chapter only for fun. Let's have Marx clone Panee, and that's it. But I couldn't live with that and more ideas started coming... And this chapter ended up being half just for fun, half plot development. And well, let's go into more depth about this all.
It all started simply with the idea that Panee would be cloned by Marx and he would try to conquer Pop Star with all these clones. Since this was pretty much Marx trying one of his plans again, I soon had the idea of also bringing back, sorta, another plan: the rainbow orb! Also because, again, it would be Panee who would capture them, in a way... Along with that, I realized that having a "Panee" showing up in the beginning, to later show a bunch of them would be perfect.
That was pretty much it... I just didn't know exactly at first how this chapter would turn out. But what I decided sorta soon was that Panee would free himself easily, like what happened with Kirby, and would try to do something to stop them. What and whether he would succeed or not, I wasn't so sure.
Then, I decided to think of something else. I figured out that, even though I knew Dedoo would be the one who would fix the machine, I didn't know why and how. The most obvious reason, at first, was that he would be obligated to fix it by Marx himself. However, Marx hadn't seen Dedoo since when he stole the cloning machine and didn't know where he was; if he did, he could've cloned Panee way before that. Moreover, how would Marx look for Dedoo, if he needs to stay close to the sky? So, I realized someone else needed to do that job, but who would out of sudden go "hey so I heard you once tried to clone this guy but this machine was broken, I'll get that scientist guy to fix it for you so that you can do that, because I can"? Well, uh, Galacta Knight. He already knew Meta Knight was all crazy about some stuff, and messing up with stuff related to that would make him mad. And since he wanted to make Meta mad... Perfect.
And then, finally, I came up with how the chapter would turn out: the clones would all disappear, that after Panee pretended he was one of his clones, but was caught (well, it seemed like the most logical plan Panee would end up trying to do). But then, yes, I know you're going to ask "...Why? Why make them disappear like that?" but oh well, I can't answer that right now. All I can say is that I ended up using this idea because it relates to another, that is also related to the end of the comic. So, for the sake of spoilers, I can't explain it right now. I'm sorry about that.
Anyway, after all that happened, the whole deal needed to be explained to the others inside the orb and they needed to be freed from there. So I decided to go for that and also have Dedoo be there, destroying the machine. Why, exactly? Well, first of all because that seemed what Dedoo would end up doing in that situation, after all the trouble the cloning machine caused. Secondly... Meta Knight voice: sorry, I can't explain that right now. And yeah, Panee freeing them because a clone of him made the orb sounded like the most obvious solution, at least, in short term like that.
Oh, and Kirby and Panee at the end? That just seemed what both would end up doing in the whole situation. Kirby would ask Panee to talk to everyone after all that had happened before, and Panee, well... He would still be confused. So confused, he doesn't even know exactly if he should accept help.
So, as you can probably see, this chapter started as a simple idea that made me had some other plot ideas for the future, as well as, probably, some more small character development for Panee.
Now, the name of the chapter... Remember how in the beginning of it I said I wasn't so sure about the name? Well, it's just that, until today, I'm not so sure about what "white out" means. I think it's similar to "black out", though. Even so, at first I thought it was what actually is "wipe out", and since the clones would disappear... But when I realized that it was wipe out, not white out, it was too late, since I liked to have white on the name, because of Panee... Well, I guess you can still interpret "white out" as like Panee's clones going... Out? Ah, I don't know. Even so, the title has also some kind of "secret meaning" but, of course, I can't tell it now. So, that's probably why I kept it anyway. That, and also that I couldn't come up with anything better.
So, that's it about the chapter... Now I just want to mention something... I've finally decided on all future chapters. Yes, that means now know exactly what will happen in this comic until its end. Don't worry, though; while I'm still not sure of when this comic will end exactly, I can say it will end, at the soonest, in the end of 2016. That's still really far away, so you don't have to worry for now.
And yeah, now I'll stop mentioning the end of the comic so many times, you're probably tired of hearing it all the time; you already know it'll happen one day. However, I might still not explain some stuff right when I mention it, THIS I can't stop, sorry. :P
Again and again, thanks for reading the comic so far! Now, for the next chapter, it's time for some character development again!

Posted at February 23rd, 2015, 3:41 pm

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Readers' Comments:

Posted by Blizzard

I wonder what the next chapter is gonna be about...

Posted at February 23rd, 2015, 3:44 pm

Posted by DeeBert (Guest)

@Blizzard: If it's going to be another character development, then I'm guessing it's about Clare and Anny.

Posted at February 23rd, 2015, 4:37 pm

Posted by Koopario

I knew he needed time to think.
If that time was only just a few seconds.

I do have to wonder just how mad Galacta really is at Meta at the end of the chapter, now that he's had revenge, though if you ask me he still should've kept his lips sealed about that...

Posted at February 23rd, 2015, 4:48 pm

Posted by Quirby64_:D

I never read these long comments. XP

Hooray for another chapter, nevertheless!

Posted at February 23rd, 2015, 5:49 pm

Posted by Extremmefan

@Gigi19972010: ... Wall of text, Gigi!

Posted at February 23rd, 2015, 6:14 pm

Posted by Guest

Panee admitted it! He's an idiot!

Posted at February 23rd, 2015, 6:44 pm

Posted by Luigi_96

Yes, Panee. Yes you are.

Posted at February 24th, 2015, 1:03 am

Posted by GraciaWarrior

I hope the next is about Daniel drake and Diego

Gigi: Whew,now I can clam down.thanks God, the story is not over yet

Posted at February 24th, 2015, 1:31 am

Posted by Nova-Moshi (Guest)

internally squeals

More character development you say...?
I really hope it's about Grace...

Posted at February 24th, 2015, 5:28 pm

Posted by Guest

@Gigi19972010: ok, there are a few unanswered questions in this chapter. 1: what happened to Marx? did dedede win? Or did Marx win? 2: how did Dedoo get to bubbly clouds to destroy the cloning machine? Reply Gigi.

Posted at February 24th, 2015, 7:16 pm

@Nova-Moshi: I agree With ya ;D

Posted at February 25th, 2015, 4:04 am

Posted by Gigi19972010


Galacta more wanted to show Meta he did something "bad", let's say, than to leave him in the dark about a situation. After all, Meta himself could find out about the whole thing easily after he realized what was happening, and Galacta knew it. So he decided to go tell Meta already instead of letting him find out by himself. You know, something like "Oh, you didn't like what happened? Well, guess who made it happen? Me~ ;)".


1- Dedede won... I thought that was obvious. If Marx had won, that would mean he could win alone and would never need the clones, which wouldn't make sense at all. Moreover, I didn't go back to that in the comic itself, which I thought that would make clear that nothing out of ordinary happened.
2- Galacta Knight brought him there to fix the machine. Then, while Marx was cloning Panee and stuff, he watched for Dedoo around there. He only stopped doing that when he noticed Marx had already done what he wanted, and he left Dedoo alone. Since Dedoo doesn't know Bubbly Clouds, he got pretty lost, but after he found the cloning machine again and the kirbies inside the orb. That's about it.

Posted at February 25th, 2015, 9:35 am

Posted by Guest

@Gigi19972010: wow! Second time you replied to me!

Posted at February 25th, 2015, 3:04 pm

Posted by Guest

@Gigi19972010: Gigi? Do you have a miiverse account? If you do my user name is Zac and will you follow me?

Posted at February 25th, 2015, 3:05 pm

Posted by Sudux


How much time do you spend writing these author comments?

Posted at April 28th, 2018, 4:19 pm

Posted by Gigi19972010


Lots of time, heh.

Posted at April 30th, 2018, 7:29 am

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