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Just Like a Butterfly - Part 20

September 23rd, 2013, 3:22 pm

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Gigi19972010
Posted by Gigi19972010

Flashbacks, title drop, and Kirby explains two of the chapter title's meanings!
Also, I kept forgetting to mention the new fan art from contradiction123: http://i.imgur.com/OGXOcpv.png
...Must be because I've been really, REALLY tired...

Posted at September 23rd, 2013, 3:22 pm

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MecanicalCH
Posted by MecanicalCH

Kirby always thinking out of context...

Posted at September 23rd, 2013, 3:24 pm

44Cinder44
Posted by 44Cinder44

Yes, Kirby, he looks 'just like a butterfly'.

*shot* *punny*

Great fanart

Posted at September 23rd, 2013, 3:38 pm

Ultimate Yoshi
Posted by Ultimate Yoshi

Panel 4: "During that time, Me, Kirby, Keeby, and Kirsy tried to find Marx..."

This is incorrect grammar here, the word 'me' shouldn't be used. The sentence should go "During that time, Kirby, Keeby, Kirsy and I tried to find Marx..."

The reason for this is because what happens if you say it separately. "Kirby tried to find Marx. Keeby tried to find Marx. Kirsy tried to find Marx. Me tried to find Marx." The last part of that doesn't make grammatical sense, so you need to use the word "I" here. It also comes at the end of the list of people involved rather than at the beginning.

Sorry if this seems a bit lengthy, but this is a grammatical error that always gets on my nerves no matter who does it. I know you're not a native English speaker, but this is something that even native English people have trouble with and it bothers me to no end.

Posted at September 23rd, 2013, 3:43 pm

Luigi_96
Posted by Luigi_96

@Ultimate Yoshi: Man, I've spoken English my whole life and I still probably get that wrong often.

Posted at September 23rd, 2013, 4:39 pm

Sapar
Posted by Sapar

@Luigi_96: Me agree.

Posted at September 23rd, 2013, 5:09 pm

Syogren
Posted by Syogren

@Ultimate Yoshi: You are not alone.

Posted at September 23rd, 2013, 5:20 pm

1ce_k1d
Posted by 1ce_k1d

I thought the butterfly effect was them losing they're self's limb by limb.

Posted at September 23rd, 2013, 10:12 pm

Posted by Over 9000 (Guest)

@Ultimate Yoshi: Well, it seems that me, Luigi_96, Sapar, and Syrogen all agree.

Posted at September 24th, 2013, 12:19 am

Posted by kirby444 (Guest)

help

I can't comment its not showing up, if it does show up it goes away, does anybody know why? =(
EDIT its not going away. =)

Posted at September 24th, 2013, 12:43 pm

@Ultimate Yoshi: You never know if Meta-Knight isn't a good speaker of English of course.

Posted at September 25th, 2013, 6:44 am

44Cinder44
Posted by 44Cinder44

@Over 9000: Luigi_96, Sapar, Syrogen and I*

Posted at September 26th, 2013, 6:41 am

Omega Kirby
Posted by Omega Kirby

@Ultimate Yoshi: Meta Knight doesn't speak 'English,' there is no 'England,' on Popstar, Meta Knight's actually speaking Polyvian, but by an astounding coincidence, both languages happen to be almost exactly the same, (apart from just a few grammatical things) Meta Knight only said 'Portuguese' in one comic, because there is one province in Dreamland, which happens to be called 'Portugal' too.
(Which, by the way, by another astounding coincidence, happens to speak Portuguese in exactly the same way as in our world!)

Posted at September 26th, 2013, 9:54 am

Gigi19972010
Posted by Gigi19972010

@Ultimate Yoshi:

Don't ever worry about pointing mistakes, that's what I want people to do; I'm sure I'm always making mistakes, but people don't usually point them out. Please tell me about those mistakes, so that I cannot make them again!
Anyway, thanks for pointing out, I'm going to fix that ASAP. To be honest, I was torn between both when writing the script and I ended up choosing the wrong one, just because, for me, it sounded best. From now on I'm going to use that trick of splitting up the items of the list, so that the same mistake won't happen again.

...And I'm kinda surprised that this topic brought up so many comments...

@Omega Kirby:

...What?
I seriously don't get where you got all those weird ideas from. As far as I know this comic is written in English, there's no place in Dream Land called "Portugal" and even if there was Meta's thoughts were in Brazilian Portuguese, which is very different from the Portuguese from Portugal (like British English is different from American English), so Meta wouldn't even use the same English from that "Dream Land Portugal".
...But you gave me a good laugh when I read your comment in my lunch break at school... I never meant to be rude, but seriously I don't get the meaning of your comment.

Posted at September 26th, 2013, 2:12 pm

nyancat6650
Posted by nyancat6650

420

Posted at May 26th, 2014, 7:57 am

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